What I found is probably duplicating Dumbledork's work, but I truly hope some of the following is helpful.
Wes
Copyedit narc:
After the meal and a few short goodbyes, the Soatomes piled into the cab
Saotomes
"Sure, no sweat," Ranma said in a caviler way as he selected the heaviest of the two
cavalierHe was thankful that he saw no other boxes that contradicted him.
Does 'other' need to be here as there were no 'other' boxes actually metioned, so...it does not follow?
Ranma heard a faint whirring sound as a rod protruded into the bowel of the toilet.
bowlHaving spent a good deal of the pervious day moving and unpacking,
previousThe street that he was on bleed into a wider avenue that was filled with pedestrians and traffic.
bledRanma smiled to himself as he reached for the marital arts magazine,
martial"At first I thought it was because he was scamming and bidding his time to try another 'join the schools' crap - you know he is...,"
I know that this is quoted dialog but it is 'spoken' and should be spelled correctly-
biding and using
'more' instead of 'another' is just my preference and can be ignored.
"If you don't you will end up huriting your mother more in the fututre."
hurting"It would be great if there were into martial arts, but that's not a deal breaker either...
they"I'd rather get all that stuff over with up front then be bugged all year long."
Did you mean
'than'?
It was well passed noon and school was dismissed for the day.
past time passed, it was past time don't know what the rule is, but 'think' I know the usage-by assumption.
"
Cloths were never my thing," Ranma pointed out.
"You came up with the velcro and tie trick for my
cloths?"
"You have to do something when you can change into a giant panda... and
cloths are expensive."
clothesI was trying that thing with my ki again and it... er, sorta backfire... a little."
backfiredDumbledork wrote
Ranma spin on his heal => span
Ranma
spun on his
heel
Sorry Dumbledork, but span is a measure or a bridging. Please don't hit me. You do great work.
Have uh grate haulidae
Old fart.
Diagonally parked in a parallel universe. Today's cliche is next century's classic.