Alrighty.
Anyone have any corrections before I post it to FFNet? Anything you want to have addressed?


Pale Wolf wrote:Hm... Thing is, I had other plans for Silver Millenium technology/magic that wouldn't really fit the crystal...
Meh. Okay then! It is now a Lost Logia power well, like the jewel seeds!
Which means Usagi isn't AAA anymore, at least not without her rock.

Well, in a way, by the end of the series, the Crystal was pretty much a part of Usagi, so there isn't much of a difference anymore...
Honestly, it seems that Nanoha is one of those combat geniuses that comes once every Ranma when it comes to magical combat. The fact that she pulls all those attacks in RH's Ex form should prove that.
Anyways, funstuff! I'll be watching for more Nanoha/SM/Ranma good-stuff from now on!


Three? I'd assume that there's probably a barrier jacket and a sailor fuku but another one (or two)? Ouch.Pale Wolf wrote:Ranma's gonna have three magical girl outfits, poor fool
Pale Wolf wrote:Posted, to FF.Net.

Three? I'd assume that there's probably a barrier jacket and a sailor fuku but another one (or two)? Ouch.
I find it oddly amusing that you're first reviewer called you a "brave and true man" for writing this.
This is one of the most interesting new fics though, nice to see something new from you.



No complaints other than the Nanoha cast didn't get much 'screen' time so to speak in this chapter.



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