Out of Time, Chapter One

[DarkFyre99]

I like what I see so far. Didn't notice any problems grammer wise, but then I really have to focus to do so.
If you're going to have Ranma go through therapy, it might be fun to do a cameo with Kusanagi Kei and Morino Ichigo from Onegai Teacher. Both characters have problems similar to Ranma's, but to a lesser degree: being in suspended animation (due to an unusual disease) for three years and six years respectively.
Just an idea I had while reading this.

[Cyber_Skaarj]

It's not really "dark" as the term generally used for fanfiction. It's more of a drama moment, the sort of thing you'd find in a drama TV show. That said, I like it. Found a few spelling mistakes, one or two minor grammar mistakes, but nothing that really took anything away from the experience of reading it as a whole (and one of these days I'm going to remind myself to take notes when reading these things so that I can actually point out spelling/grammar mistakes instead of just saying they're there... )