Temple of Ranma's Sailor Senshi Seifuku

Unfortunately, as one's skill increases, so does one's eye for flaws in one's own work. Hence, it's often the case that authors and artists can't bear to look at their work anymore, despite the fact that there's not really that much wrong with it. They stare at a page, then run off and go do someth...

The Sailor Moon thingie isn't the only thing that happens in the chapter. Admittedly, it may have been saying too much, but what the hey. I just felt that I had to point out that I call it darker than NETTG for a reason. Okay, understood that some of the people did read the chapters before posting.....

Firstly, it's not true that the version we currently have won't be changed by your comments. I'm reviewing each chapter before Ben posts it, and some changes are already being made as we go based on comments others have made. While the early chapters may not be revised right away, commentary can aff...

Here's the reply from Ben. ********** From: Sunshine Temple Posted: Sun Apr 16, 2006 3:07 pm ********** It's still funny. There's that much. That's a very nice bonus. All I wanted to do with this story was to get it done. :) On the technical aspect it looks fine. Nothing glaring stood out while I wa...

I will of course pass these comments on to Ben, so we can expect him to have his own explanations. You're right about it being a bit rushed. However, to give some sort of feeble defense to the idea, it was meant to be a companion piece, more than a stand-alone work. He's the first to admit that he n...

Be careful what you wish for. Since you're asking for serious commentary, I'll give it to you. Brace yourself. First impression: This chapter is disjointed, and there isn't quite enough explanation of what's going on that doesn't require going back and re-reading the earlier chapters. It's about the...

Ben and I have been wanting a few critiques about this story, but the FFML has been all but dead recently. The only public C&C we've gotten so far is one from DB Sommer. Gotta say that I really hate the fact that something like 95% of people who subscribe to the FFML these days think that it's j...