Temple of Ranma's Sailor Senshi Seifuku

The last paragraph sounds more like you are trying to sell the idea rather then ask for input. That Said: The Sailor Crystals thing is a give or take. Either include them which will make your job harder or just forget explaining it entirely and dive in. Given your stated story I would recommend not ...

You want Akane to sucessfully enter a cooking school... Nabiki would be more sucessful though she would be a hard sell for more then one reason. It would be easier to just have Akane expelled as well. Despite Kuno's money and other attempts the Principal is not against doing something that his son w...

Spica75 wrote:Huh, it´s not THAT rare an expression...

I have met people who never heard of that turn of phrase before. but that is neither here no there. I think we are all skirting the problem that we need to find a way to get this skirting problem into a fic....

It would have to be a one shot. I cannot see working this into anything big.

No the idea is the knew the truth about the curse but the pun is strictly that he doesn't want to wear that outfit and that they think he is skirting the issue of him not giving the real reasons for not joining, (the entire contract with his mother is something they do not know about.) Thus they thi...

Okay this scene has irritated me for so long I have officially given up. I tried to think of a way to work it into an active fic of mine or maybe make a one shot of it but I have failed everytime. So I am posting it here and if someone wants to use it, great, otherwise I can get the stupid line out ...

I went back to earlier chapters and I never realized just apt that Lautia was when calling Akane a Ragamuffin. Ragamuffins are muscular, and heavy. The physical traits include a rectangular, broad-chested body with shoulders supporting a short neck. The body appears rectangular with a broad chest an...

Amusingly Ranma himself is guilty of using Mallet-sama in Ranma 1/2 technically the only one who didn't out of the main reoccuring cast was Kasumi... I think Ranma is going to cave now and go merch just to find a way to keep Nabiki in check by cutting her off at the pass. After all you can't sell so...

This is amusing, and made me think if Akane got her hands on said hammer. Everytime Ranma gets wacked something is debugged. Just how many would he have?

Still is in character for her in my opinion. Akane never lost anyone since her mother and the thought of it happening again is causing her to deny it, especially since in her mind Ranma and Ryoga fight all the time. Though despite it all she never did stop believing in Ranma in the Manga even if she...

And Akane Tendo as Galaxia/Sailor Chaos

I would read it just for this.

okay here is the think, We need Ranma to be Ranma, but we need the story to not be a tangled mess too. This is why Marvel and DC DO classify each series as a bubble universe. Earth-616 is the universe of the current comics Earth-1610 is the Ultimates universe Earth-1044 X-men evolution universe Thes...

Grammar/spelling issues not withstanding the entire story up to this point was a good work, though it feels rushed (plot wise,) keyword 'feels.' I know you have a place you want to take it but its the trip there that is causing you trouble with some readers. I know since my story 'Siren's Calling' i...

if she had death/rebirth cycles and ends up being dotted on by Ranma unintentionally even with the war she might be a bit sheltered. it could affect her mind after all Usagi tends to be a tad out of it at times even after all she had seen and done.

The first story that came to mind when I read the idea was To tell a Hawk from a Handsaw