Temple of Ranma's Sailor Senshi Seifuku

************************************** Do Digimon Dream of Digital Sheep? By Ellf ************************************** Chapter Two: Monster Friend to the Boy Girl Disclaimer: I own nothing here. Each character belongs to its respective owner. Jenrya stepped off the train once it got to the station...

***************************************** Ranma woke up the following morning in his usual fashion, flying through the air out the window of the bedroom and into the yard. He managed to adjust himself in the air so that he landed on his feet, and a few seconds later, Salamon landed next to him. “Mor...

This was a new place where Calumon hadn’t been before. Giddiness welled up inside his little digimon heart and he knew that he had to explore. Stretching his ears out so he could fly, he took to the sky to look around. There were so many people! He didn’t know who he wanted to play with first. He co...

I guess I can tell you how Salamon and I met, Akane. Just don’t interrupt too much, either of ya. To understand how I met Salamon, you probably have to understand how I started to get into digimon. I said that I sorta fell into it. That was actually a bit literal. You see, Pop and I had moved to Shi...

Rewrote the end of that scene. Speeding up the metabolism, it didn’t take much longer for Salamon to return to normal, and Ranma breathed a sigh of relief before turning to Akane. “You really need to pay more attention when cooking, Akane. Salamon shouldn’t be eating things like that.” Akane was in ...

And now the completed scene: ************************** Ranma rolled her eyes up to the sky, almost begging the ground to swallow her whole, and when it didn’t, she knew she’d have to deal with a very inquisitive child digimon. Salamon had always been a curious little monster and whether she liked i...

And now, an incomplete scene Ranma rolled her eyes up to the sky, almost begging the ground to swallow her whole, and when it didn’t, she knew she’d have to deal with a very inquisitive child digimon. Salamon had always been a curious little monster and whether she liked it or not, she’d have to ans...

Okay, I'll be using this thread for incomplete chapters. As scenes get written, I'll post them here. Jenrya stepped off the train once it got to the station at Furinkan, Nerima. The sun barely peeked over the horizon, signaling the time. If this digimon took too long to beat, he was going to have to...

Basically the second scene was from an earlier incarnation of the chapter which I'd kept around for editing purposes... and it got posted when I did a select all.

End the fight twice? I only ended it once.

Edit: Oh, oops. Didn't mean to have that there, fixed now.

****************************** Do Digimon Dream of Digital Sheep? By Ellf ***************************** Chapter One: Fight! Return of the Lost Tamer! Disclaimer: I own nothing. Series belong to their respective creators. It was twilight when Ranma was able to convince the doctors to release him. He ...

It was twilight when Ranma was able to convince the doctors to release him. He was mostly better by then. Ryouga never did much actual damage to him. A few bruises, a popped shoulder, honestly if it weren’t for the Lost Boy’s immense toughness, Ranma would have been worried about him instead. His ri...

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Nabiki's comment about looking at the watch should be looking at the clock or the time. Just a minor thing that probably comes from your native tongue translating the saying to English and back. The specific idiom you're looking for is "Have you looked at the time? It's four in the morning!&quo...

No offense, but you really need a beta. The idea is sound, but your spelling and grammar... grate. The flow is decent though. Please... get a patient beta. I will also comment that your dialogue doesn't really seem natural. Ranma's is okay, but the rest seems... perhaps overly formal. The writing do...