Temple of Ranma's Sailor Senshi Seifuku

In response to Cheb: Yes, this Ranma is more educated. Her grandmother Blacksky tricked her into reading! And I agree - her transformation was slow, steady, and made perfect sense along the way. She picked up responsibility, and is now living up to it. In response to the "hoping Ranma and WIC c...

At this time, I'm too lazy to read all the comments already posted, so I simply apologize for any duplicates: [well this is why I update the version {Bah humbug - I was halfway through when I broke for the party, and simply kept reading. I'll re-read again soon with the newer versions. [I have notes...

Thank you for another chapter in an excellent fanfic - it was a great holiday present, even if I almost chose to be late to a work holiday party because I was half-way through! At this time, I'm too lazy to read all the comments already posted, so I simply apologize for any duplicates: "Saotome...

I have to think that's either Parrot-chan or Tucan-san...

Tucan-san can!

So... _what_ black orbs? My first honest thought was her eyes, but I don't think she used "Rocketo Eyeball" on them. [They're her darkstar bursts. I had mentioned in previous chapters that in addition to steering with them she could sense a bit, and she was building that ability <Perhaps s...

only a mater of time -- matter sparing -- sparring preformed beautify -- performed beautifully, or was that deliberate? Even if the battle was short there would still be plenty of work afterwards, likely the whole day would be shot. -- Hah, reality rears its ugly, debriefing head. Sounds like early ...

"War, I love it. Death, destruction, and EASY MONEY!" Lt. Manning (Orguss 02)

[Why do you want to take over the world?] "I want to kill all the ugly, monkey-looking guys like you, and take all the women in the world for myself!" Dark Schneider (Bastard!)

Well, well, very interesting indeed. We start out with youma that think, and end up with youma that think, are employed by people who kill failures (and generally just send youma out to die, time and time again), and who have encountered a powerful neutral faction. What will be really interesting to...

[Yes, Sunny knows what she's fighting for, it's not just herself or some ideal. It's her family and her friends. Very personal. The previous DarkStar didn't have any connections with other people, she was alone (save for Serenity) but Sunny has a lot to live and fight for. Also importantly, Ranma ap...

[Try this correction [[ Lieutenant Hilbert said over their headsets. Happy to be flying into battle again, he increased altitude. ]] --Better. Hmmm... so, the helicopter - notably not a terribly quiet craft - was at a higher altitude (three or four clicks?), dove down at the encampment, and then orb...

Initial comments: Eighty kilos for a 40mm grenade launcher? And a ROF of 240 to 310 rounds per minute? Geez, they'd have been better off with a Plamya AG-17, much less the AGS-30 (AGS-17 or AGS-30 with the tripod she wouldn't need), unless they really, really want 40mm grenades instead of 30mm - and...

I would also note that at least one form of traditional maintenance is to wipe the blade down with the (soft and thick) ricepaper to remove the previous oil, then powder it (with some variant on a powdered stone - limestone? I'm not sure which rock, you can check at bugei.com if you like), wiping th...

[[ Jarvis nodded, undid her belt, threaded it through the holster, adjusted it onto her hip and slid a few magazines from the box into her coat. The WM 500 or Standard Succubus Pistol was a logical investment given the potential of the D Program. She then readjusted the belt a bit. ]] Much better. E...

As usual, re-reading brings up a few more points. When will the Brood Senshi, or at least Ranma (and Eve?) meet the other succubus and her daughters that work for the company - the one whose soul sword broke? I'm going to have to guess the other succubus is less powerful and more magically skilled. ...

Now, the interesting point, of course, is where Eve fits into the Brood. She's not a daughter, hasn't lost her personality (...think of what I'll do for this family - though what if the Brood Senshi and the Company end up at odds?), isn't mentally helpless... but is physically and magically weak, la...