Temple of Ranma's Sailor Senshi Seifuku

LawOhki wrote:'Did I just win or lose?' Ranma asked himself in confusion as the teleporter kicked in.

heh

Nodoka is plottong something now. heh

Wow so dark, I aprove. Now how do the others react to one of their own being outed that hard.

I tried to read what you posted here but the font size was too big to read for me, sorry. But I imagine others have the same problem. You also have wall of text syndrome. I am being critical because as you said this is your first writing for personal, and I know you want to do well. Normal fonts sho...

My fics are mostly not updated these days (although I am poking at fixing that) but I think the new Sailor Moon show is starting to get new people to ff.net, as my story Beautiful Magical Girl Civil War has gotten two new reviews in about 24-48 hours of each other. my other stories have not gotten a...

I reread the note at the end of the last chapter and noticed that it mentioned both Sakura having monsterous stregnth and Ranma being age 13. Sakura is only that strong post time jump (something that even caught Kakashi off guard). In PTS they are about 15-16 this leaves Ranma to be about three year...

If I need to reference the Manga I go to http://www.mangasee.com/manga/?series=Naruto *cough* I am sure we all already have copies of the original manga and use this for ease of use only....

Spokavriel wrote: 12 tail's machinations

Don't you mean 10 tails?

Been enjoying the fic so far. I really hate how they are doing shit in Naruto's cannon plot, but you can't do anything about insane people. As for the last chapter, you really think Tsuande isnt going to track her down? Ripping a path of destruction across the landscape? While I WOULD agree; Tsunad...

I have reread this a few times and I keep running into a problem. You are using the word 'proselytize' while this is a proper form and usage it is a word I had to look up when I first read it, I would recommend changing it as its not a common word.

We need a scene where Ranma, Naruto, and Tsunade are all in the Hokage's office argueing and having the rest of team seven looking on in wonder as Ranma is behaving in the exact same way to Tsunade as Naruto... making it seem like a proper family. Someone needs to make the comment "This looks f...

Naw I think the most evil thing to do would be to do a blood test against Naruto and have it come out as a positive DNA match as a relative, but that defeats the purpose of the story.

Naw to abandon it right you need at least three more chapters...

it would be amusing to see Ranma's dozen flaten a boss without using more then a few basic sword skills ocassionally with even heathclif looking on in wonder

"Ohh happy day! The Schools are joined!!!"

So... Giant Slayer huh... Sounds good.