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Re: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense

Ellen Kuhfeld wrote:Giant Ducks do exist. But what happened to the carrot?


That is a big duck.

Heh the Monty Python reminds me of Ranma's newest sister (who will also quote it).

And this image of the two, where Ranma is dressed well... not as "Fancy" as the last one
by Sunshine Temple
Mon Dec 03, 2018 2:10 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense
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Re: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense

Ellen Kuhfeld wrote:You mean she really is lighter than a duck?


She is a wee lass, but even then, it'd have to be a pretty big duck.
by Sunshine Temple
Sun Dec 02, 2018 9:46 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense
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Re: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense

Ellen Kuhfeld wrote:That's not dressed to the nines. That's dressed to the XXXs.


Heh. Well... succubus.

But 'tis a fair cop.
by Sunshine Temple
Sun Dec 02, 2018 2:33 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense
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Re: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense

Ranma has an ego, but break through that crust and there's insecurity below. That's one of the things you're handling especially well. Thanks you. I really appreciate that. I do try to have that. Ranma's flaws and challenges in the Return aren't just the physical (which... some will say she's overp...
by Sunshine Temple
Sun Dec 02, 2018 12:41 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense
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Re: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense

That's a relief. Though for the "wave around", there are hints about succubae and their tails. Which they /do/ wave around. If memory serves Misako does just that in to Rei in Capital Offense. And that's good that the violence isn't out of context. Guilty, I do use food and clothes as prox...
by Sunshine Temple
Sun Dec 02, 2018 12:04 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense
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Re: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense

I'm not sure. I try to keep it in Lime territory and not be too explicit in sexual content (ironic for a story about succubae).

Violent content on the other hand.

Hmm.
by Sunshine Temple
Sat Dec 01, 2018 5:28 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense
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Re: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense

And here we go....

Chapter 10 is posted.

Next well will be something new.

Bonding Allure.
by Sunshine Temple
Fri Nov 30, 2018 9:00 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense
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Re: Fic Status

After tonight there's one chapter left in Capital Offense.

I'll post that next week.

And then I'll post the revisions (minor) to Blood Debts.

And after that... Bonding Allure ch1 and 2.
by Sunshine Temple
Fri Nov 23, 2018 5:11 pm
 
Forum: Sunny's Story Status
Topic: Fic Status
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Re: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense

Whoops. Forgot to mention ch8 is up last week.

Aslo chapter 9 is up.

So one last chapter to go.
by Sunshine Temple
Fri Nov 23, 2018 5:10 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense
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Re: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense

Chapter 7 is up.

And Ranma was warned not to mess with her powers...
by Sunshine Temple
Fri Nov 09, 2018 9:44 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense
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Re: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense

Chapter 6 is up.

And things.... well the battle keeps turning.
by Sunshine Temple
Fri Nov 02, 2018 7:58 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense
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Re: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense

And chapter 5 is up.

The midway point and the battle is starting to... turn.
by Sunshine Temple
Sat Oct 27, 2018 12:04 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense
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Re: Fic Status

The next return story: Bonding Allure has one chapter done and in editing, and the second chapter with one scene left.
by Sunshine Temple
Sat Oct 20, 2018 4:04 pm
 
Forum: Sunny's Story Status
Topic: Fic Status
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Views: 44486

Re: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense

Chapter 4 is up. And now we see why the Company was warning the Russian Cyborgs to now muck around with reality.
by Sunshine Temple
Fri Oct 19, 2018 6:34 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense
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Re: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense

Chapter 3, here's where a simple plan... stops being quite so simple.
by Sunshine Temple
Fri Oct 12, 2018 8:33 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Return Revised Book Four: Capital Offense
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