Temple of Ranma's Sailor Senshi Seifuku

there was a minor typo/incrrect spelling

its okaeri.. not okeiri

otherwise.. great start and akane really doesnt come off as bad. she's herself... she's no saint.. but she's definately no demon

thanks for the ideas :3 crystl: i like the scaffolding idea... but i dont see where it woudl happen exactly. i am sorta skittish of having ranma interact with the senshi on the first time around. at most i only want him to have met the inners once or twice briefly... but everythign is fluid. and i l...

I need a good, workable idea for how Hotaru learns of Ranma's curse.. and at the same time he learns of her healing ability. For those who know my idea behind SG, this is the first time through the timeline where Ranma doesn't interact with the senshi and just becomes Hotaru's friend. What i need is...

*can't find a way to remove own topics... and wonder if that rule applys here anyway...*
putting it up on ffnet in a little bit :3 hope the peopel that read it there arn't TOO angry with my many-month absence ._. *slinks off to organize and then post*

fixed that in my local version, thanks kadu.
anyone see any other mistakes or any unclear parts? or is it ready for 'printing'?

FINISHED! gah.. cant believe i took so long... but i think i ran with it ok (or more likely it ended up runnign with me...) C&C now please :3 already fed it through word's spellchecker and i tend to keep an eye out for stupid things.. but nobody's perfect. ---------- ---------- Storms of Change ...

lol.. poor RANMA having to deal with HARUHI plus whoever the other three are XD

yup. thats the basic idea. ranma is not going to trust the senshi at all. but he will be fair and not start attacking them. he knows hotaru 'died' because of them, but not which them and he had heard reports of there being more than just the inners in his research. im thinking of having Nemesis's fi...

I vote for you to add what you already had to this, and post the full version. at the moment.. this IS the full version.. thats why im askign weather i shoudl continue with what i planned.. or cut to a new chapter. my muse decided to torment me recently by giving me strange ideas.. but not helping ...

It could also kill him. how coudl it kill him? say he's pinned under a log or somethign thats actually supported by somethgin else? changing to a smaller form woudlmake it easier to escape.. and as long as changing foesnt cause more damange (ex broken rib puncturing lung because of the change) i do...

is that such a bad thing? <.< hehehe ^^;;; basicly my options right now are
1: cut here
2: add the 'tsukuro teasing pokari and ikumi bursts in pissed off'
3: the whole shebang, ending where i originally planned and it explains the headache...

nooo~~ the two weeks is what happened BEFORE this... i just jumped ahead and flashbacked/summarized ^^;

yeah, episode 1 is actually.. what.. 8? then 2 is 1 and 3 is 2 i think... 12 is the episode after 1 i believe...
oh yeah.. forgot to mention im also watchign the new Aa! Megami-sama series... sad to say that ive never really had a problem with bagpipes... but really dont like that opening ^^;;;

i just realized after finishign off the last section that ive reached my average chapter size for SoC... continuing on i could either end it after the next scene (explains the wail and end chapter wiht ikumi going to bed), i coudl continue with my original idea for the chapter (and end up probably p...

Full Moon? Is that the one with the girl who wants to be a singer but is dying or something and gets help from some shinigamis? sorta correct. she has throaght cancer and will die in one year from the series start. she then bolts off to the audition she had already been accepted to and takuto ends ...