Well, here I am, going back to my roots. This is only the first chapter and not everything is supposed to be clear. It's going to be a fairly long fic, so give it some time. I've only got the first chapter done so far so try and keep an open mind. I won't be posting this anywhere else until I get a...
D-D-D-Double Post! Anyway, I started updating this regularly. I think the last chapter I posted on here was...two? Something like that. It's up to chapter 5 now. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4823447/1/Reversal_of_Fortunes Any feedback from you guys would be appreciated. I was a bit worried about the ...
Okay, I'm willing to concede the point on the sword. I'll fix it when I revise the story again. I'll also look into Ukyo strength feats more, but I don't know how many I'll find.
Two things stick out to me as wrong with this chapter. Firstly, there's a word missing from this sentence: Could it be that Shampoo was finally starting to around? Secondly, Shampoo's sword is a dao, not a dadao- they're the same family, Chinese Sabres, but the dadao is a greatsword, designed to be...
New chapter! This is, like, a third draft so spotting anything I missed would be appreciated. Hope the action scenes come out well since I haven't written one in a loooooong time. Chapter Two It was the night before Thursday and all through the house, not a creature was stirring...except for a cat. ...
Crescent Pulsar: the point I made was that Shampoo is outright stated to love Ranma in the anime. In the manga, it's merely implied, and there's a good deal of evidence that leans the other way- it's hard to see someone loving a person when they always land their bike on that person whenever they m...
Actually, no. Traditionally, the Japanese have around ten years age difference in marriages. Considering that the manga puts Kasumi and Tofu in a traditional light, the age difference wouldn't mean very much. For certain, Kasumi wouldn't call him a pedophile. You're applying Western logic to Eastern...
You're mistaking physical AND political isolation in the 40s (modern-day Qinghai province was quite backwater then, and I'll bet the Amazons didn't care one whit about the KMT or it's woes, including the CCP), and what would still amount to political isolation today. As for adding stuff about the B...
Yes, well, as I said I haven't studdied it very much outside of a religious context. Anyway, I think it's about time this thread got back on track. If you want to continue the historical questioning, feel free to pm me. I always enjoy a good letter or two. Anyway, working on chapter two right now. I...
Crescent Pulsar wrote:That's not the breaking point. ^^;
Um, how can you say that's not the breaking point? Shampoo poked a big block of metal and it exploded, just like when Ryoga uses it on a rock or something.
She has performed a tech. similar to theBreaking Point. Ithink she uses her melon hammers to destroy walls. Chapter 60 shows that Shampoo knows a technique similar to the Breaking Point. I think that's what Dumble is talking about. http://www.mangavolume.com/index.php?serie=ranma&chapter=ranma-...
How about this? If you can articulate the right answer for why the Jews crucified Jesus Christ, one of the most historic figures period, with the full historical context I'll buy you're ready to handle this. Otherwise I think you're biting off more then you can really chew. Yes, I can answer that o...
The Japanese still bombed several towns/cities in Qinghai during WWII so the threat of an invasion was still alive and well. Not to mention that legs of the Long March went through parts of Qinghai before the War. Both of those events are part of the overreaching plot of the story. While a fan fic m...
Well, as a History major going for my teaching certification, I am of the school of thought that the more we talk about something the more it's understood and less of a taboo. If people today don't think about the mistakes of the past, they will forever be ignorant and real abuses will be forgotten.