Temple of Ranma's Sailor Senshi Seifuku

I didn't realized Beak was a real marvel hero... https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Barnell_Bohusk

I thought it was an original creation.

> This is a time travel story and now I am gonna go on a break in dimension hopping. YEEEEEAH. My first real cross over fic was Mirror Multiples, and was fascinating since then with time hopping. Your myst character is developing pretty well, I like her nerdiness and references. Felt sad that Fryo h...

> Different strokes for different folks.

Totally loving the time traveling part also love the dodging of who Ranma going to be with.

I love sci fi and fantasy and time traveling is such a fascinating thing to play with and the possibilities in plot wise is just so awesome from my perspective.

My initial thoughts was in general it was a very enjoyable fic nothing like an info dump that OP has stated. The other two users have stated that the OC was lacking. I can see their point but to me at least there is potential in plot and I thought the OC was interesting enough to be enjoyable. But I...

> 1. Did the future war comes off okay? Yes, I thought it reminds me of starcraft for some reason... > 2. Did the beach scene come off okay and the bonding. It's ok. The bonding? With the guys it was decent, the girls it was too short imo. The bonding with Jean and the teasing I thought was good. > ...

> To me, base on chinese martial arts movie. The first warning after you have given your word is to injured the illegal practitioner so that he could no longer practice it. If he proceed to do it, then death. Thoughts? Old chinese films and movies have it where they kill the nerve system where suppo...

> 1. Did you get that it was Herb and Ranma talking at the very beginning, because their conversation, whatever it was boils down to that. Or should I blatantly add "Dragon-breath" or something just as disparaging at the end? No I didn't get that it was Herb that was talking. I was more li...

> Can you elaborate on what you mean by too much adjective?

I meant to say that it wasn't overly too descriptive and give the readers room for imagination. Economical in wordings.

> 1. So how did the battle come off as? Fun, creative and maybe short live? It was fun reading it and it wasn't as drag out. It's good fast pace too making seems like it's a fight instead of lots of adjectives. I like gotcha is better, weird japanese seems out of no where and unnecessary, at least t...

Yah, if you don't like podex no worries.

I rather have more story than tedious podex which I can wiki and search. >___<

> You could if you want but i always try to seed the mutants you will see early on. It is what it is.

Hey Vahn, no clue what seed means? >___<. But it help me discover and learn more about these new mutants from X-men world that would be awesome.

It's ok. I think you're doing too much so nothing significant stands out but if that gets everything out of the way so you can do fun stuff so be it. I dunno if it's useful or not but every time I come across a new mutant that you introduce I have to google it. It's very hard and there's some descri...

http://web.archive.org/web/20100103135814/http://ranmafics.com/Stories/Evolution/index.html https://www.fanfiction.net/community/Ranma-Xmen-crossoversfusions/40419/99/0/1/0/0/0/0/ Have you read shudder evolution fanfiction? https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1081266/Shudder Or jeffrey one shot wong just w...

It would be nostalgic to me. During the early 90s there were a few fanfiction with songs, a Street Fighter one was aweeeesome song. I mean worst case they can just stop the song. I thiiiink Long Ngo, One Shot Wong and Donny Cheng had songs too. It's been a while. edit: I think it would add to the fi...

Classic on top of my head: Eye's of a Stranger's by Long Ngo http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Dojo/2881/ Life and Times by Donny Cheng http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Ginza/4537/ http://members.shaw.ca/chengdo/ Mirrors Multiplied by skysabre http://www.fanfiction.net/u/40569/Skysaber Quantum Destinies ...