Temple of Ranma's Sailor Senshi Seifuku

Keep up the good work I loved Why Sailor Pluto Hates the Bet, but this is even better!

Slight overuse of Japanese is not a deal breaker; if the fic is good otherwise, I can let it slide. I mean, fanfic authors' "abuse" of Japanese has nothing on Engrish .

If it qualifies, Paragon is the best :D Original, polished, witty, funny, show-not-tell, great pacing... I love it. I have become jaded from reading too many fics. Most fukufics (and Ranma fanfics in general) lack fundamentals of good storytelling. My pet peeves are poor dialog, tell-not-show, and c...