Temple of Ranma's Sailor Senshi Seifuku

In the second-to-last frame, Ranko's left leg doesn't look like it's attached to the rest of her body. The edge skirt falls halfway across it vertically. Hmm.. your right. I'll have to move it closer. The drawings are pretty rough, but you've got the characters looking enough like themselves that t...

I'm working on making Equal Halves into an actual comic.
Im currently on page ten of my pencil version (Inked versions will have
strong line borders)
Here is a sketch of page five of the Equal halves comic:
Ranko walking to the train station
http://www.angelfire.com/ult/knights/Sketch.html