Temple of Ranma's Sailor Senshi Seifuku

lwf58 wrote:Perhaps because impure thoughts never cross her mind... due to the fact that she's an airhead and it's rare for any thoughts at all to make the trip!

I am really thinking this one is true.

Wyrd wrote:Pluto: could be fun to have her parents be time travellers or immortals themselves...Having her meet her parents before she is even born could be quite amusing.

It would be interesting to have The Doctor be Pluto's father, since we know he has had kids.

I know you have already posted this so you might not want anymore comments, but you seem to have some POV errors during the fight scene.

I use a line of x's (xxxx) for breaks

Thanks, I'll be sure to look at that.

This is probaly to late to be of any use but Hugo from Suikoden 3. As long as he has one of the True Runes he won't die of old age and he looks about the same age as Skuld.

This is fairly well written. I like how you made the two gods end up being weak. I won't repete what others have said, but I have one minor point to bring up why did Ranma take Ryouga to Ukyo's instead of Ryouga's house, he does have one you know.

First chapter and non-revised chapters here http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4304874/1/Curses_Arent_the_Only_Change Curses Aren't The Only Change Chapter 2 Disclaimer: I think that you are smart enough to figure out how much of this I own. Irusan of Knowth was not known for his forbearance of insults. He...

Ok I hope this is better. Curses Aren't The Only Change Chapter 1 Disclaimer: I think that you are smart enough to figure out how much of this I own. There are many different parallel realities where the same people live sometimes greatly different lives because they or the people around them have m...

Um i thought I did make it pretty clear where they are with this line:

But the story really starts when Genma's son, Ranma, and Makoto Kino are sixteen in London, England.

Anyway after I get this revised again should I just post it up on this tread or what?

Before you get into my list. Just letting you know right away. It still needs quite a lot of work. Good the only way I will get better is if someone tells me what I did wrong. Trying to hit her and then when you replay the scene from another angle she's pinned? Did reality change with the viewpoint...

Been awhile since I posted any thing here, butI finished revising this and thought I would like to see what people here thought of it. Curses Aren't The Only Change Chapter 1 Disclaimer: I think that you are smart enough to figure out how much of this I own. There are many different parallel worlds ...

They would have known not to exile the Black Moon Clan in the first place.

What if the mage used illusion over a hole in the ground? That is he digs a hole and puts the illusion of normal ground or an enemy that needs to be fought over it. Danger sence is not going to help with that.

I can see a Squishy Wizard who is good at illusions being a problem for the Wreaking Crew.