Temple of Ranma's Sailor Senshi Seifuku

I've got this to about 2/3rds done now and though I'd share it with everyone again. I still need to write a long scene with the five wives meeting and Ranma meeting Katsuhito and telling everyone that he's married five girls as well as Kissing Ukyo. Chapter 14: Lunch: All you can eat Ramen and Okono...

It's unclear how long they kept Ranma as a girl, if his stay was over 10 months before they found a cure then there will be no fertile newborn male babies unless they have been kept in clean rooms since birth until they can receive the cure. Of course that still leaves a 12-15 year gap where all chi...

To improve this story line you need to eliminate the stored genetic material from other males that is kept in Sperm Banks, and I think a series of riots and terrorism should be mentioned, maybe a flashback, news story, or side story. Maybe some mention of the rushed cloning projects that have sprung...

In Fannon everyone at Furinkan except Kuno knows about the curse and Ranma has to deal with being splashed in the locker room. But we don't see Ranma explain the curse that many times in the series, and we don't see Ranma interact with that many people outside the regular cast. I think there were a ...

Disclaimer: I don't own any of these characters, but I'm not trying to make any money off this so I guess it's OK then. This is my third fan fiction, so please review and tell me what you think. Different Blood By Paul Bennett a.k.a. Shadowbakasama Chapter 1: The Wedding Ranma, Akane, Genma, Mousse,...

It's good your not using the tranformation to screw with the curse. Since there is no template for Ranma's transformation you should probably have him develope it from scratch with the help of any wizards that they get to help. That way he gets to pick his outfit and make up his own attacks. I think...

I don't like the whole instant girl Ranma and think that Ranma wouldn't give up his manhood except as a LAST resort. I think that Ranma would have to loose several battles against youma or Drak Generals before he would lock his curse, and even then would try and keep the option open to unlock it. Lo...

Don't jump to concusions so fast. I may not like Akane, but she's not this cold blooded, and I try and keep people in character.
But I shouldn't give out spoilers, just know that there is a reason that she is acting so out of character.

Only 1/2 Dead By Paul Bennett a.k.a. Shadowbakasama Chapter 1: Left for Dead ‘They are so going to pay if I live thou this.’ I thought to myself as a lay bleeding out on the ground. ‘It had been a set up, I should have known that Akane was acting too nice. She wanted me to take her to an action movi...

There is a reason that this isn't a good idea in a continuation fanfic. You are dealing with characters that have tons of canon and fanon behind them, then start out the story 2 years after with what amounts to a massively OOC main character. You can say that you'll do flashbacks to develope the cha...

I got a suggestion, it would cause some rewriting but seems like a good idea. When Mistress 9 took over Hotaru's body and became the tall, sexy chick with 8 feet of hair, she was probably pouring power into her body causing it into it's mature perfected state. Mistress 9 has no real body of her own,...

Rolemaster had a good level of detail, but was very narrow in focus and wasn't subjected to the reality checking that people do on GURPS. Also BESM is from GoO and the SM RPG is based on BESM. I may still have some Rolemaster stuff buried in the closet somewhere with the old D&D, Car Wars, Shado...

I like the Role Playing, if they had been to a future dreamworld besides Ranma's which seems to be a SM crossover world you could have them playing Big Eyes Small Mouth to make it perfect, but Asuka would probably use GURPS for its level of detail and realism.

I personally don't think demonic contracts are negotiable. In Ah Megami-Sama the Goddesses are punished for swearing and would be severly punished for breaking a promise. Demonic contracts would have even harsher enforcement penalties, since the evil demons would want to get out of their side, and t...

Ranma Crossing Over to the Wild Side By Paul Bennett a.k.a. Shadowbakasama Chapter 16: Awakening Obsidian -------------------------------------- Like in an old Frankenstein sequel a ship captured in the Arctic Icepack was freed as an iceberg broke loose and drifted south to melt, but this wasn’t an ...