Temple of Ranma's Sailor Senshi Seifuku

here's another:

Possibilities by Brian

too bad it hasn't been updated since 2006.

Good chapter, though rather short. I guess you're building up to something. Looks like the NWC will need to reassess their position and strategy, not just Mousse, if Beneda spills everything. I'm especially interested in how this will change their relationship with the senshi.

Hmm, do you mean the surviving Inquisitor at the end of the chapter? The thing with her was, she was unconscious 'till the fight was over, so they were focusing on the active enemies. And Ranma had already taken out Jadeite by the time the Senshi finished off the Darkmistress and her two helpers. I...

That was one hell of a fight. I second that. spreading out as the reacted to this new turn of events I think you forgot the 'y.' I'm wondering why the Senshi went after Beneda, and not after Jadeite and/or the other surviving Inquisitor. Moon or Kamen could have dusted the two while Mars went after...

Hmm... How about going with Luna instead of Ukyou? You could have her trying to get back into the fight and/or looking for Sailor Moon.

I don't know. I think the breather seems a bit out of place, and too drama heavy, but that's just me. How about Ukyou finding a revived Luna mumbling to herself as both make their way to the fight?

Great battle scene! As for the breather, how about using Happosai? You can use him either for comedic or serious effect.

Also, you missed this one:

was the thought that ran threw Luna's mind

Now get back to work on the next chapter.

First of all, yay! Another great chapter! No errors that I saw, and what a wonderful cliffhanger! I'll pray for the residents of Nerima.

I have to wonder how long Beneda can keep her act going, and how gullible the heroes can be.

Heh heh. Well, actually, the next chapter should be out much faster than this one was. Part of the reason that this one took so long was that I was having trouble deciding where to put the chapter break. I ended up writing way into what became chapter ten before I had enough context to finally sett...

"How did you managed to get away form someone so powerful?"

Aside from that, another great chapter; nice buildup for the next chapter. Now if I can only find a way to make you update this story faster. The waiting is killing me.

Another great chapter. I'm getting this feeling that the Sailor Moon timeline will be accelerated with the other Senshi awakening and joining Mercury, Mars, and Moon earlier; the Darkmistress seems to be as powerful as any of the four generals, but a lot more vicious. I look forward to the battle ro...

You have the right idea, Cheb. I've seen fan authors who put "do not distribute" on their fics, and authors who specifically authorize it. I'll have to consider what to do about this myself. In any case, "unaltered" is bound to be a feature of any permission I give. Um, so any s...

As an archiver myself, and someone who's been involved with anime fan fiction for a long time, my take is this: It's never okay to post another person's stories on the internet without permission. Not even if they cannot be contacted. The fact that some of them might not mind makes no difference; y...

It need not be near that bad if you can merely link to the ones that are elsewhere... As my prior post indicates, far and away the bulk of them do in fact still exist on fanfiction.net... he only had overall a small percentage of them libraried or hosted locally to his site. However, not all those ...

I think, sitting here discussing fanfiction, that we aren't a bunch of copyright absolutists. At the same time, this is a social endeavour. I might be annoyed if somebody put my fanfics in with a bunch of other fanfics I don't especially like. This is a situation best covered by the negative formul...