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Re: R and A Setting idea

...Okay, now that I've read MORE of Worm, it would take an epic skill in order to mix Ranma 1/2 into that and not have it suck a$$. There's a level of grim-dark in certain stories that, right out of the gate, just don't freaking work and there's too much of a tonal shift to credibly mix the two as f...
by TattooTheDL
Tue Jul 04, 2017 10:12 pm
 
Forum: Ideas, Outlines and Scenes
Topic: R and A Setting idea
Replies: 7
Views: 3076

Re: The Imperial Servant.

New chapter, peeps! Not everything is being dished out at once now that we're past the big hump, but there's still plenty left to go. I'm glad that I have (so far) remained in the realm of coherent and sensible for most of you with this story. I repeat, that's always been my biggest sticking point w...
by TattooTheDL
Tue Jul 04, 2017 7:59 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: The Imperial Servant.
Replies: 36
Views: 12518

Re: Imperial Servant Chapter 2

Now, yes, Ranma 1/2 is slapstick. But Akane's reaction to some girl she clearly doesn't know latching on to Ranma would not be immediately Declaration of Perversion and Dropping the Hammer. A more in character reaction would be for Akane to ask/demand Ranma tell her who this new girl is. Ranma woul...
by TattooTheDL
Tue Jul 04, 2017 7:54 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: The Imperial Servant.
Replies: 36
Views: 12518

R and A Setting idea

This idea came about because I started reading the story "Worm", and about 5 minutes into thinking up a way to plausibly have Ranma get involved, a thought occurred to me. A set up that, I'm not quite sure has been done before. Ranma introduces himself to Taylor, the main character of Worm...
by TattooTheDL
Wed Jun 28, 2017 9:54 am
 
Forum: Ideas, Outlines and Scenes
Topic: R and A Setting idea
Replies: 7
Views: 3076

Re: The Imperial Servant.

Alright, in a bit of a mood and not necessarily a good one, but I felt like responding to this. Ranma is under the effect of a pressure point that effectively shut down his sex-drive. Except that this is nonsensical. Should be a rating scale for fanfiction, for how much a person is willing to suspen...
by TattooTheDL
Tue May 09, 2017 5:12 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: The Imperial Servant.
Replies: 36
Views: 12518

Re: The Imperial Servant.

Sorry for the delay, people. IRL issues insisted that what free time I had to write would immediately be taken over by other, significantly energy-draining duties. All that said, let's get this show on the road, and find out what happens when Nerima plays a collective "Will! It! BLEND!?" e...
by TattooTheDL
Tue May 02, 2017 7:10 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: The Imperial Servant.
Replies: 36
Views: 12518

Re: Updated/New Fic list

I noticed it updated the other day on AFF, now up to chapter 4, but I was wondering why you changed the name slightly. I screwed up when I first uploaded the fics on HF and AFF, and had one version with " A Wild Horse" and " The Wild Horse" and changed it so they both became &qu...
by TattooTheDL
Fri Mar 17, 2017 10:31 pm
 
Forum: Miscellaneous, Polls, RPGs
Topic: Updated/New Fic list
Replies: 129
Views: 38889

Re: The Imperial Servant.

Dumbledork wrote:Sorry for bursting your bubble but Genma has turned off Ranma's sex drive in fanfics more often than Happosai has.

That said the new chapter was enjoyable and funny.

I'm aware. <_< >_> :wink:
by TattooTheDL
Fri Feb 17, 2017 8:19 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: The Imperial Servant.
Replies: 36
Views: 12518

Imperial Servant Chapter 4: Broken

Alright, this has been a long time coming and I blame a lot of factors....so let's get started! ----- This one took a little longer getting out there, neh? I blame aliens. Aliens in this case meaning, ‘Re-editing a story for a wider audience than just me, myself, and I.’ and ‘being perpetually distr...
by TattooTheDL
Thu Feb 16, 2017 8:07 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: The Imperial Servant.
Replies: 36
Views: 12518

Re: The Imperial Servant.

The writing quality is pretty good. I'll grant, but this last bit was a little too slapstick to me... Personally, I was originally leaning toward the cause simply being Ranmas internal control being more than most... not only because of any form of energy manipulation, but the fact he has been able...
by TattooTheDL
Wed Jan 11, 2017 11:02 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: The Imperial Servant.
Replies: 36
Views: 12518

Imperial Servant Chapter 3: Passive

Here's chapter 3,once again y'all are getting this before anyone else does, and I hope you enjoy! ----- Imperial Servant: Chapter 3 Passive OOOOOO Silence. The entire field stilled, save for the distant caw of a crow flying overhead. Almost as one, the wrecking crew and others turned to stare at the...
by TattooTheDL
Wed Jan 11, 2017 7:05 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: The Imperial Servant.
Replies: 36
Views: 12518

Imperial Servant Chapter 2

Alright, here's the next piece. Again, any assistance y'all can give me will be greatly appreciated, especially because the first few paragraphs in the beginning don't really flow right to me and I'd love some help with that. Imperial Servant: Chapter 2 Binding OOOOOO Hinako-sensei swung her feet un...
by TattooTheDL
Wed Jan 04, 2017 6:21 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: The Imperial Servant.
Replies: 36
Views: 12518

Re: The Imperial Servant.

Keep up the good work. Thanks for the help. A lot of these errors happened because I've got an app on my phone that let's me add notes and such to GoogleDrive and I use it a lot when I'm out on walks around town. Funny enough, it's easier to add accents when using that then it is in Word. Thanks fo...
by TattooTheDL
Tue Jan 03, 2017 11:04 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: The Imperial Servant.
Replies: 36
Views: 12518

Imperial Servant Chapter 2

Remember how I said I'd be putting up the next chapters on here before FF.net? Well here's chapter 2 and I'd love y'all's help before I put it there to make sure it flows properly. Imperial Servant Chapter 1: Reputation Xuriel wondered how her life had come to this. Shortly after leaving behind the ...
by TattooTheDL
Mon Jan 02, 2017 7:55 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: The Imperial Servant.
Replies: 36
Views: 12518

Re: The Dark Lords Ascendant, Chapter 14 [R/SM Cross]

Thank you very much! :D It's really encouraging to hear when people are enjoying the story. What can I say, you've done the series and it's focal point of "Instant anarchy, just add Nerima" very proud. I especially love the reactions of the Sailor Scouts to the anarchy that is the NWC, AN...
by TattooTheDL
Thu Dec 29, 2016 12:14 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: The Dark Lords Ascendant, Chapter 14 [R/SM Cross]
Replies: 7
Views: 2973
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