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Re: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)

In my humble opinion, such split is best published as *four* separate fanfics, Arc 1, Arc 2a, Arc 2b and Arc 3, with tons of warnings on how to read them. This is only my opinion, though. We need more opinions. Right now it's split down Startup, Scattershot and Endgame. Honestly though I'd LOVE to ...
by Ryu Gabriev
Sun Jul 23, 2017 2:27 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)
Replies: 100
Views: 71228

Re: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)

If I made the Home team's story it's own fiction instead of it mixed in with Favorite Company, would that work for you?

Cause here's the thing: The Crusader and the Traveller are going to meet at the end of both their stories, and both are needed to 'save the world' as we say.
by Ryu Gabriev
Sat Jul 22, 2017 11:00 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)
Replies: 100
Views: 71228

Re: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)

Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters, ideas, or concepts borrowed for the purposes of this story. I just wish to create stories to tell to all who would listen. Chapter 7: General Chaos ***** Chronicle Log - Day 3. Commander Jadzia Dax Speaking… ***** In hindsight, getting caught up in Jon...
by Ryu Gabriev
Mon Jul 03, 2017 6:17 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)
Replies: 100
Views: 71228

Re: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)

They didn't. Q Made a twinning effect occur. there are TWO teams now, one out in Multiverse and one still here.
by Ryu Gabriev
Mon Apr 17, 2017 1:00 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)
Replies: 100
Views: 71228

Re: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)

It's been two months... you thought I was dragging my heels again, no doubt. But in reality it i̶s̶ ̶m̶e̶,̶ ̶D̶i̶o̶!̶!̶ the full, complete chapter!! Enjoy! **** Chapter 6: Fall Back **** The flash from the godling’s action subsided, leaving a small group of people remaining in the tunnel entranceway...
by Ryu Gabriev
Thu Mar 30, 2017 1:56 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)
Replies: 100
Views: 71228

Re: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)

Wow... no replies at all... *shrugs* Alright then. Here's the end of the chapter (FINALLY) and here's to me kicking off the new year with a faster production timetable. Cheers! ***** Iroh's POV ***** Once back at Monument Island, the whole group began investigating all about the Siphon for possible ...
by Ryu Gabriev
Tue Jan 17, 2017 4:02 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)
Replies: 100
Views: 71228

Re: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)

****** Iroh's POV ****** At first I believed that the dense vapor would protect us from the monster’s pursuit, but that thought was quickly erased as twin beams of light began cutting through the mist. I began speaking in hushed tones, hoping the others would understand why. “We must fly faster than...
by Ryu Gabriev
Sun Dec 04, 2016 3:58 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)
Replies: 100
Views: 71228

Re: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)

Still looking for a BETA, so if anyone wants the job please let me know... Enjoy. ******* Clearly his is a family of artisans, for our strategist to be capable of speaking such drama with a straight face. Miss Yohko suddenly asked about those we had battled previously, confused as to why he would go...
by Ryu Gabriev
Fri Oct 21, 2016 6:03 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)
Replies: 100
Views: 71228

Re: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)

Why would Q give a damn about the opinions of someone that's effectively an amoeba to him?
by Ryu Gabriev
Fri Oct 07, 2016 2:37 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)
Replies: 100
Views: 71228

Re: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)

Chapter 5: Elizabeth ******** Iroh of the Fire Nation ******** Our well earned mirth soon came to an end, and with it, did our journey resume. Jonathan led us past the carved stairwell and through a pair of heavy doors to a fenced balcony outside. To the left of us floating in the breeze was a craft...
by Ryu Gabriev
Tue Oct 04, 2016 2:09 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)
Replies: 100
Views: 71228

Re: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)

Apparently real life + No Red Bull for my muse = no activity for several months. I can only apologize in shame... as well as hope you enjoy! ****** Yohko Mano ****** Almost as soon as I jumped down the stairs to the garden room that same hooded man from before materialized in front of me. He now hel...
by Ryu Gabriev
Sun Aug 21, 2016 12:37 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)
Replies: 100
Views: 71228

Re: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)

Been distracted by A-kon plus nasty cold. Please enjoy! ******* Yohko Mano ******* “Well, this is rather interesting.” ...Wha?...Whazzat? “Which part, brother? What she’s wearing or what she can do?” “What they all can do, actually.” “Indeed. It’s rather refreshing to find something completely new a...
by Ryu Gabriev
Mon Jun 27, 2016 2:56 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)
Replies: 100
Views: 71228

Re: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)

Usually, when I ask how something I write looks, I'm not worried about grammar or syntax, but rather in the quality of story produced. Is the pace too fast or slow, did I just blow through a great scene for no reason, or in this case did I make what could've been an epic fight scene end too swiftly?...
by Ryu Gabriev
Sat May 14, 2016 2:42 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)
Replies: 100
Views: 71228

Re: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)

Sorry if the experimental format ruined things for you Heintz... I just wanted to try writing things in a new and original way. And I hear that George R. R. Martin uses a similar style of chapter to what I was trying out. If it works for someone, well... But please don't leave. Your opinions are ver...
by Ryu Gabriev
Sat Apr 23, 2016 4:01 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)
Replies: 100
Views: 71228

Re: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)

Another snip in just 7 days?! He's gone mad!! ****** I smiled along with Jadzia just as Jon started herding us in a random direction. As we wandered the streets, I was at first excitedly immersed in all the unique sights around the five of us: weird mechanical horse-drawn carriages, yards of overhea...
by Ryu Gabriev
Fri Apr 15, 2016 6:00 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Favorite Company - (Reverse SI)
Replies: 100
Views: 71228
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