ckosacranoid wrote:Which movie? THERE are quite a number of zilla movies, the last one I know of is zilla 2000 where they beat up the us version and id 4 in it.
Konsaki wrote:/shrug
It might be just me but finding spots like that pull me out of the story, even if for just a moment.
Konsaki wrote:You're changing verb tenses too close together and it's reading oddly. An example is the quote above where you go from past tense to present tense.
Admittedly, it's kinda rare, but each instance is noticeable.
Cheb wrote:Anyway, I haven't seen SM/Mythos crosses, and this one definitely deserves 4 out of 5.
Cheb wrote:Nice Pity it's unfinished.