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Re: Night Shift 3

Chibi-Usa whistled. “I wonder what it’ll look like when finished.”

“I guess.”


Did you skip a line of dialogue? Or should maybe Chibi-Usa add a bit to her line.
by uragaaru
Sun Dec 08, 2013 11:23 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Night Shift 3
Replies: 200
Views: 26594

Re: Pinch Hitter 3 - Redone Ryouga Scene

The idea that his "bisexuality" is completely caused and reliant on his curse also makes that much more of a source of conflict too. And it (hopefully) means that we will avoid the cliche: "Oh Ranma, we (the crossover cast) completely understand you. Come. Ignore those horrible peopl...
by uragaaru
Tue Oct 01, 2013 3:19 am
 
Forum: Ideas, Outlines and Scenes
Topic: Pinch Hitter 3 - Redone Ryouga Scene
Replies: 12
Views: 2873

Re: Night Shift - Oh dear I'm writing a fukufic

It's not a huge deal, but I think the context is novel. The one time I can recall Ranma hitting them was when they were talking about/leering at Akane with Gosunkugi in the anime.
by uragaaru
Mon Sep 30, 2013 2:24 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Night Shift - Oh dear I'm writing a fukufic
Replies: 95
Views: 11778

Re: Night Shift - Oh dear I'm writing a fukufic

Going to make it kind of a thing for both Ranma and Nodoka to mumble in their sleep That's a fun little quirk to give to both of them. I like the classroom scene, especially the rumormill and Ranma's cringing over his girl-height. I was a little surprised to see Ranma hit Hiro and Dai. Not out of c...
by uragaaru
Mon Sep 30, 2013 1:09 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Night Shift - Oh dear I'm writing a fukufic
Replies: 95
Views: 11778

Re: Pinch Hitter 3 - Redone Ryouga Scene

However, Ranma does have some other worries. Stuck a girl, suddenly needs to fight monsters, etc. Those all seem like they'd be a bigger deal in terms of right now then sexual preferences and attraction Ranma's known about and likely thought about for awhile. Yep. That's why I basically only have t...
by uragaaru
Mon Sep 30, 2013 12:56 am
 
Forum: Ideas, Outlines and Scenes
Topic: Pinch Hitter 3 - Redone Ryouga Scene
Replies: 12
Views: 2873

Re: Pinch Hitter 3 - Redone Ryouga Scene

Thanks for the feedback. I will probably follow Frank's siggestion and add back in some RYouga jerkiness to the beginning and maybe smooth out some of the discomfort Ranma expresses. I would say that ijp92 has the right of it for the most part. I don't want to delve too much in backstory here, but t...
by uragaaru
Sun Sep 29, 2013 11:27 pm
 
Forum: Ideas, Outlines and Scenes
Topic: Pinch Hitter 3 - Redone Ryouga Scene
Replies: 12
Views: 2873

Pinch Hitter 3 - Redone Ryouga Scene

As you know I've been dragging on the new chapter. In truth I was unhappy with the portrayal of Ryouga (as were many of you). I want there to be some kind of antagonism, but I realized I was making him too unsympathetic for later on. I decided a better route was for Ryouga to have some of the better...
by uragaaru
Sun Sep 29, 2013 3:50 am
 
Forum: Ideas, Outlines and Scenes
Topic: Pinch Hitter 3 - Redone Ryouga Scene
Replies: 12
Views: 2873

Re: Inner Senshi: Forever Alone?

In both the manga and the anime(to different extents), it's left pretty open-ended. One can assume Mako and Mina (if we take Kaitou Ace's curse as a metaphorical "this is the price for being in the masquerade" sort of thing) will find a relationship at some point. Rei perhaps has no in int...
by uragaaru
Tue Sep 10, 2013 4:08 am
 
Forum: Specific Series: Sailor Moon
Topic: Inner Senshi: Forever Alone?
Replies: 9
Views: 2132

Re: Transgender transformation fanfic ideas

This is ironic given my writing, but I don't like transformation stories. More specifically, I tend to get easily bored by stories that center their premise on a magical or super-science sex change unless a)it's incidental to the main plot/a complicating but relatively minor device to a larger story...
by uragaaru
Mon Aug 26, 2013 7:37 pm
 
Forum: Ideas, Outlines and Scenes
Topic: Transgender transformation fanfic ideas
Replies: 7
Views: 1687

Re: Stories where Ranma is *not* the one with Gender Issues

You asked "... where Ranma is *not* the one ...". That biases answers toward fics with Ranma in them. If you want other titles to search, try Cinderella Boy, Futaba-Kun Change, Cheeky Angel, Kampfer, Space Pirate Mito, Maze, Family Compo, Birdy the Mighty, Kashimashi, Le Chevalier d'Eon, ...
by uragaaru
Mon Aug 19, 2013 4:52 pm
 
Forum: Fic Search
Topic: Stories where Ranma is *not* the one with Gender Issues
Replies: 29
Views: 3556

Re: Help with college stuff

Hmm... I would say (in decreasing order): Economics, Law, Business, Sociology, or Communications. Are you envisioning your Crystal Tokyo as a constitutional monarchy or as a benevolent dictatorship? If the former, I'd squeeze in Political Science between Law and Business. As an aside, I cannot imagi...
by uragaaru
Sun Aug 18, 2013 3:52 am
 
Forum: Fic Research
Topic: Help with college stuff
Replies: 43
Views: 7896

Re: Help with college stuff

So In Japanese college you typically enter as a student of a particular school (School of Science, Business, Education, etc). Double majoring is for all intents and purposes unheard of, though one can do classes outside of their department. Majoring in Japanese college is pretty similar to doing so ...
by uragaaru
Sun Aug 18, 2013 3:25 am
 
Forum: Fic Research
Topic: Help with college stuff
Replies: 43
Views: 7896

Pinch Hitter Chapter 3

This is a (still quite) rough draft of the chapter. I imagine it's riddled with my usual amount of mechanical errors. Certain sections have gone through several rewrites while others are still pretty rough, structurally. That said, my main concerns for readers are: ⋅ Ryouga and his charact...
by uragaaru
Fri Aug 16, 2013 4:52 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Pinch Hitter Chapter 3
Replies: 4
Views: 1476

Stories where Ranma is *not* the one with Gender Issues

I've been kicking around a few ideas in this vein myself (a small hint of which was in part one of Creatures of Habit and basically the premist of Wandering Martial Artist ), but I'm curious as to what's out there since it;s something I haven't really seen in recent stories. What sorts of stories wh...
by uragaaru
Thu Aug 08, 2013 11:59 pm
 
Forum: Fic Search
Topic: Stories where Ranma is *not* the one with Gender Issues
Replies: 29
Views: 3556
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