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Re: [Fenspace] The Melancholy of Mackie-chan

---A short update. Using the PHO format Welcome to the Fenboards You are currently logged in, TheNewKidOfSpeed You are viewing: • Threads you have replied to • AND Threads that have new replies • OR private message conversations with new replies • Thread OP is displayed • Ten posts per page • Last t...
by Dartz
Mon Apr 10, 2017 2:42 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: [Fenspace] The Melancholy of Mackie-chan
Replies: 3
Views: 4611

Re: [Fenspace] The Melancholy of Mackie-chan

That's actually not far wrong... Fenspace: (Http://www.fenspace.net) is an open setting, sou you're welcome to swing by a join us here : http://drunkardswalkforums.yuku.com/forums/8/Fenspace Don't ask to call it a reconstruction or a deconstruction - just that everyone writing there has their own op...
by Dartz
Wed Dec 28, 2016 9:06 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: [Fenspace] The Melancholy of Mackie-chan
Replies: 3
Views: 4611

[Fenspace] The Melancholy of Mackie-chan

Yeah. Gender bender. Identity issues. Spacefighters. Combat Cyborgs. Conspiracies. A bit of a grab-bag really. With some help from the fine people at the Fenspace Forum. He remembered reaching for the eject handles. And the Crunch of the impact. “Mackie?” Needless to say, his Sister's voice in his m...
by Dartz
Mon Dec 26, 2016 6:34 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: [Fenspace] The Melancholy of Mackie-chan
Replies: 3
Views: 4611

Re: New Perspective Evangelion 14

Grenaded along with the HDD it was on.
by Dartz
Fri Sep 02, 2016 8:31 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: New Perspective Evangelion 14
Replies: 8
Views: 7606

Re: New Perspective Evangelion 14

I'm glad you liked it. One thing I've been trying hard to do is build the world around them and actually develop it. Nice to see it's paying off. Now it's time to actually start going off the rails. Three tired days..... somebody's bound to have spotted the Pilots out and about and snapped a picture...
by Dartz
Fri Aug 26, 2016 7:07 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: New Perspective Evangelion 14
Replies: 8
Views: 7606

New Perspective Evangelion 14

In which we finally beat the 13th chapter SI curse. After 3 years. So it's boung to be a little edge-rough. I was a Teenage Shoujo Protagonist.... -- January 31st, 2013 Weather: Warm. Sunshine. Drizzle. Mam is coming home. She called me from America today to tell me. Just one more test down in Brock...
by Dartz
Mon Aug 22, 2016 5:45 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: New Perspective Evangelion 14
Replies: 8
Views: 7606

Re: New Perspective Evanglion, Part 14.

The fic that's old enough to drink. At least I was drinking age ten N-n-n-n-n-n-n-nn-Necropost! -- Darkness came, but none of us could sleep. I lay in bed in my nightwear, scratching myself, dipping a toe in a few teenaged fantasies. Asuka shuffled under her blankets, alternating between reading, cl...
by Dartz
Mon Feb 15, 2016 7:05 pm
 
Forum: Ideas, Outlines and Scenes
Topic: New Perspective Evanglion, Part 14.
Replies: 9
Views: 9338

Re: [Fenspace] 12 Hour Mission

Not the most populsr of fenfics. But finished, nonetheless. Again with thanks to Cobalt for the contributions. --- Another lab. More things that didn't bare thinking about. That fuse had long since blown. Jet slipped between nightmares, searching for anything useful now. Maps. Equipment. Food. Ammun...
by Dartz
Fri Sep 04, 2015 5:41 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: [Fenspace] 12 Hour Mission
Replies: 3
Views: 4309

Re: [Fenspace] 12 Hour Mission

----- 10 more hours. Another dead friend, pinned between two fire-teams and an isolation door. One cracked blade, the other scratched where it'd cut a burst of .50bmg in half. A visor that'd gone the way of Captain Kirk's shirt. Three more dead berserker-things - one already destroyed before she fou...
by Dartz
Fri Sep 04, 2015 5:36 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: [Fenspace] 12 Hour Mission
Replies: 3
Views: 4309

[Fenspace] 12 Hour Mission

From the Fenspace Shared Continuity Just a 12 hour mission at most....1/3 ---------- Operation Time: 36 Hours. 36 hours into a 12 hour mission, Jet crouched in a darkened corridor, taking the time to listen. Radio chatter flowed through her mind, sensor arrays picking up the sparks in the corridors ...
by Dartz
Fri Sep 04, 2015 5:35 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: [Fenspace] 12 Hour Mission
Replies: 3
Views: 4309

Re: New Perspective Evanglion, Part 14.

Tricky. It's not so much the story, but keeping it interesting now that Noriko has... ahem... overcome her must pressing difficulty. --- Ten minutes quickly became twenty, as I lost myself in the fine art of getting clean. What began as a post-jog shower mutated into the human equivalent of a full a...
by Dartz
Sat Jun 20, 2015 6:53 pm
 
Forum: Ideas, Outlines and Scenes
Topic: New Perspective Evanglion, Part 14.
Replies: 9
Views: 9338

Re: New Perspective Evanglion, Part 14.

And.... in a fit of madness, I ended up continuing things along that line.... rather than finishing it there ---- And now I knew better. I'd learned the hard way. I looked away at the boat still sailing on the lake, while he sat himself down onto the sand, kicking his heels in the sand. He glanced a...
by Dartz
Sun Sep 21, 2014 5:02 pm
 
Forum: Ideas, Outlines and Scenes
Topic: New Perspective Evanglion, Part 14.
Replies: 9
Views: 9338

Re: New Perspective Evanglion, Part 14.

It's already been shaved down. The basic thrust is supposed to be "Lets not kill ourselves trying to save ourselves" or something similar. The whole opening was supposed to reference that, with Noriko burning the last of her strength to get discovered and just sort of dying the moment afte...
by Dartz
Thu Jul 10, 2014 5:42 pm
 
Forum: Ideas, Outlines and Scenes
Topic: New Perspective Evanglion, Part 14.
Replies: 9
Views: 9338

New Perspective Evanglion, Part 14.

Six months after the last chapter was posted, I'm still struggling to get an opening for this Work is utterly killing my ability to generate anything more creative than a TPS report that'll never be read. Anyway. After months of bashing it with the wordhammer, I might have something. Unfortunately, ...
by Dartz
Wed Jul 09, 2014 7:50 pm
 
Forum: Ideas, Outlines and Scenes
Topic: New Perspective Evanglion, Part 14.
Replies: 9
Views: 9338

Re: NPE Part 13:: Upwards difficulty adjustment

[It also says interesting things about Nori since, if I recall, she's not physically attracted to females anymore. >>No doubt. Noriko is rather more complex in that regards than she admits... it's definitely not binary. [There's also that as much as I rag on the military deficiencies of Evangelion (...
by Dartz
Sat Nov 16, 2013 11:49 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: NPE Part 13:: Upwards difficulty adjustment
Replies: 9
Views: 5153
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