Did you intend to make it sound that arresting Ranma was also a possibility? Knowing politics, the change may be in the cards (if the Phoenix offer them a goody more appealing to the politicians), but I was hoping to build up the alliance a bit before the inevitable betrayal. Leaving the Colonel th...
Spoiled Brats Disclaimer: Kyon-kun... denwa. (Not again!!!) Disclaimer #2: I was so tempted to make the chapter title a reference to Schrodinger's Cat. Chapter Thirty-Nine – The Face of the Enemy Aino Minako, in her guise as Sailor Venus, looked at her fiancee in confusion. "A vampire?" &q...
Spoiled Brats Disclaimer: Kyon-kun... denwa. (Argh!) Author's Notes: I cannot thank the folks ad fukufics dot com, and especially grammar and spelling proof reader extraordinaire, J. St. C. Patrick, enough for giving these chapters the once over before I post them. Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!...
Spoiled Brats Disclaimer: Kyon-kun... denwa. Author's Notes: Well, it seems in open office (or at least in my installation) you have to select a language in order for spell check to work. I still haven't figured out how to get English to be my default language, but at least when I start a new chapte...
Spoiled Brats Disclaimer #1: Kyon-kun... denwa. Disclaimer #2: For some reason, my spell checker in open office quit working, so you folks at fukufics dot com get to see what my spelling is like when it's not augmented by technology. My thanks in advance for any errors you all catch. If anyone has s...
Thanks for the C&C folks. I was going for shock on Dr. Mizuno's part, but I was also trying to get Akane come off as creepily cheery as I imagined, given what she did at Kiima's orders. Not sure how that part of this chapter worked out. *shrugs* In any case, the emphasis National Novel Writer's ...
Spoiled Brats Disclaimer: Kyon-kun... denwa. Chapter 35 – Aftermath Mizuno Saeko had had difficult patients before. Some people simply did not know what was best for them. But three of her four patients at the moment had taken stubborness to a new height. Every single one of them insisted that they ...
Spoiled Brats Disclaimer: Some days I could really shoot whoever decided to have NaNoWriMo in November. This month sucks when you work retail. Chapter Thirty-Four – Operation Tweety Bird: Springing the Trap Aino Minako had seen a lot of bizarre things in the ten months since Artemis had contacted he...
Spoiled Brats Disclaimer: “Fan Fic writers frequently see the need to begin their fiction with statements that look sort of like the page quote. It should be noted that these disclaimers are not only completely meaningless from a legal point of view but also generally redundant, especially if posted...
Spoiled Brats Disclaimer: It's a good thing that Flash compilers cost around $700. The last thing I need is yet another hobby... Chapter 32 – Operation Tweety Bird: Setting the Trap beep beep beep beep Mizuno Ami absently reached out to turn off her alarm clock. It took the girl a few seconds to rea...
Thanks for the C&C, everyone. Still think this chapter could've been better, but the idea behind NaNoWriMo is to stop obsessing over getting things "perfect," so I guess "good enough" will have to be good enough.
(still not satisfied with this chapter, so any input is appreciated) Spoiled Brats Disclaimer: A dirty mind is a terrible thing to waste. Chapter 31 – Homecoming, part four: Endymion Ranma, in her Tomoe Hotaru guise, shimmered into existance outside of a rather nice apartment not too far away from K...
Thanks for the C&C everyone. The ones who would be spoiled are your readers, with you releasing new chapters so rapidly :) :oops: OK, I'm blaming you for Real Life rearing its ugly head today. :wink: (J/K) I only got an hour's worth of work on the next chaper today. :( Hopefully, I'll be able to...
Spoiled Brats Disclaimer: I have nothing to disclaim here. Move along. Move along. Chapter Thirty – Homecoming part three: Kuonji 'I see the tomboy hasn't lost anything in the last ten years. She's still got a great right hook. At least someone doesn't automatically approve of our current relationsh...
Spoiled Brats Disclaimer: The characters from Ranma ½, Pretty Guardian Sailor Moon, and Devil Hunter Yohko that appear in this story are not my own. I'm just playing with them for my own amusement. If anyone else is entertained by this story, that's a bonus. Chapter Twenty-Nine – Return to Nerima pa...