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Re: Draw the Curtain: Chapter 2

Thanks. Fixed.
by ToastedPine
Mon Jun 29, 2009 9:05 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Draw the Curtain: Chapter 2
Replies: 3
Views: 3026

Draw the Curtain: Chapter 2

Author’s foreword: Here is the next part of my continued battle against the forces of Ranma-chan fiction. Comments and constructive criticism will be greatly appreciated. This is still in beta-phase so I’m willing to revise if someone convinces me of the need. Previous parts can be seen at: http://w...
by ToastedPine
Mon Jun 29, 2009 1:07 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Draw the Curtain: Chapter 2
Replies: 3
Views: 3026

While the paramedic angle works for keeping Ranma at the train station, what about after they arrive? With Genma's 'history' and given usual fannon assumptions about early training methods of 'keep away from the police', or even just general authority figure problems, I would really peg Ranma as th...
by ToastedPine
Sun Mar 08, 2009 6:14 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Draw the Curtain: Prologue and Chapter 1
Replies: 15
Views: 8531

Beside leather-bound volumes of the Adventures of Detective Kudo, over ramps made of playing cards, Narutaki Shinichi's parents were fans of a made up detective novel series in the story :p. What does seem somewhat odd though, is Ranma. I find it somewhat odd that Ranma stuck around long enough to ...
by ToastedPine
Sun Mar 08, 2009 3:38 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Draw the Curtain: Prologue and Chapter 1
Replies: 15
Views: 8531

Ranma half-heartedly chucked a pillow at the laughing Nabiki as she made her getaway


I accidentally had the word order in reverse.

Side note: This isn't a cross. All the new characters are original.
by ToastedPine
Sun Mar 08, 2009 11:55 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Draw the Curtain: Prologue and Chapter 1
Replies: 15
Views: 8531

The wisps of steam caressing her face gently did nothing to assuage Kasumi’s worry. Oh sure, from the outside, she looked perfectly calm, the very image of the Tendo matriarch that she had stubbornly cultivated since she was little, but it was an hour past dinner and Ranma was still missing! She und...
by ToastedPine
Sat Mar 07, 2009 3:42 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Draw the Curtain: Prologue and Chapter 1
Replies: 15
Views: 8531

Draw the Curtain: Prologue and Chapter 1

Author's foreword: I wrote this with the intent of creating Rankofiction that I could stand reading. I'm honestly not sure if I've succeeded in that endeavor, but I did learn a lot about the process and why people who write Rankofics think the way they do. Disclaimer: I don't own Ranma 1/2 It was a ...
by ToastedPine
Sat Mar 07, 2009 3:39 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: Draw the Curtain: Prologue and Chapter 1
Replies: 15
Views: 8531

Fixed spelling mistake in my author's notes.
by ToastedPine
Mon Dec 01, 2008 1:20 am
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: [Ranma/Haruhi Cross] Demiglace Graffiti: Chapter 5b
Replies: 7
Views: 4432

The taxi may have been canon... but I'm saying if it stuck out that much to Ranma, why would he not have investigated? Ah that, yeah, I did add a small investigation scene. As for Ranma thinking a certain way, I want it to come off more as a hypothetical line of thought. Ranma himself wouldn't thin...
by ToastedPine
Fri Nov 28, 2008 3:52 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: [Ranma/Haruhi Cross] Demiglace Graffiti: Chapter 5b
Replies: 7
Views: 4432

Corrections made. Some of the spelling mistakes I didn't include because I'm used to spelling some words with the Canadian spelling, and my spellcheck is set to Canada. The black Taxi is canon. It's a car used in the anime and novels. All things considered, even this Ranma I would have a hard time s...
by ToastedPine
Fri Nov 28, 2008 2:33 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: [Ranma/Haruhi Cross] Demiglace Graffiti: Chapter 5b
Replies: 7
Views: 4432

[Ranma/Haruhi Cross] Demiglace Graffiti: Chapter 5b

Comments and grammar corrections will be greatly appreciated. Previous chapters can be found at http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3293331/1/ Demiglace Graffiti: Chapter 5b Stretching my arms, I rolled the chair away from the worktable in my room. I had a little more than a week left before the meeting and...
by ToastedPine
Thu Nov 27, 2008 8:07 pm
 
Forum: Stories and C&C
Topic: [Ranma/Haruhi Cross] Demiglace Graffiti: Chapter 5b
Replies: 7
Views: 4432

Canon check; Ranma and fighting women

Just wondering if there is an actual instance in the manga where Ranma says that he doesn't like to fight women.
by ToastedPine
Wed Feb 20, 2008 10:31 pm
 
Forum: Specific Series: Ranma
Topic: Canon check; Ranma and fighting women
Replies: 3
Views: 3225

Claymade's point was that Romeo and Juliet was part of the standard curriculum at Furinken and was also standard curriculum at Akane's elementary school. Thus, it is not unreasonable to expect any decent student to be familiar with the play. Therefore, Ranma having never heard of it implies that he...
by ToastedPine
Mon Feb 18, 2008 12:22 pm
 
Forum: Specific Series: Ranma
Topic: How educated is Ranma?
Replies: 24
Views: 13882

No I'm saying that the manga doesn't give enough evidence to say with any certainty as to what his education is. People who goof off are both the really smart and the dumb. Yes most people who do so are dumb but not all. I know most people don't see my theory as the best it doesn't contradict the m...
by ToastedPine
Sun Feb 17, 2008 9:44 pm
 
Forum: Specific Series: Ranma
Topic: How educated is Ranma?
Replies: 24
Views: 13882

I'm with Drawde on this one. From the interviews, it looks like she focuses on ideas that seem fun or funny without putting much thought to the social implications of Ranma 1/2. Calling anything in Ranma attempted murder is like considering Bugs Bunny a homicidal maniac. I don't even bother with Inu...
by ToastedPine
Sun Jan 27, 2008 10:07 am
 
Forum: Specific Series: Ranma
Topic: Sexism in Ranma 1/2
Replies: 29
Views: 16242
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