Temple of Ranma's Sailor Senshi Seifuku

To me, it seemed quite obvious that Mei is Ranma. He/she just chooses to go as Mei as a girl and goes as Ranma as a guy I think.

Seraphim I think why he's disqusted with the Rune Weapon idea is the nature behind it. A Rune Weapon, to my knowledge, is a weapon which powered by a soul of a living being; Usually unwillingly. If the weapon is destroyed, so is the soul residing in it. An example that I can think off the top of my ...

Love the story so far. One thing that bothers me in this chapter is that it ends very abruptly. I'm left with the feeling that there should be more to the chapter.

I like the story so far. Particularly the twist in Kasumi's personality.
I didn't catch any errors my first time through so I might go through it again just to make sure.
By the way. What does -pyon stand for?

“To prove to Kami-Sama that he’s wrong, that the good can be corrupted, and that the corrupted can be redeemed, that nothing working in absolutes and black and whites forever.” This part didn't seemed to flow well. Felt kind of like a run on sentence. Maybe try: "To prove to Kami-Sama that he'...

Wow... I find it kinda funny how a simple pair of glasses and a slight shift can make even Ranma look mousy.

But her death was not immediate, she lived long enough to tell her father and husband that she wished to see Tenchi trained to use his power. The "Natural Death" was a lie told to Tenchi until he was old enough to be told the truth, which I believe came out at the end of OVA 3. Actually, ...

That is true, but I think Z was an exception since he was a direct result of Tokimi's manipulation. Kind of like how Tenchi is the result of Tsunami's manipulations.

I just wanted to clear something up. It was mentioned earlier that Ranma has the ability to summon 9+ Wings of the Light Hawk. I was just wondering, is Ranma's ability to summon the Light Hawk Wings due to the bond with PI or if it's his own ability? It was mentioned in Cannon that Juraian nobles ca...

I'm curious though. Why did you make Marller Hild's daughter? As far as I know, Marller is only a demon 1st class.

Innortal wrote:As for Inuyasha, he almost took down a plane with a Wind Scar, trying to summon diamond shards.

I don't remember him ever doing this. Anyway, I don't think the Tetsusaiga can intentionally be used against humans.

It seems to me that Setsuna did sound a little off. I can see her doing what she did, but the manner of how she spoke seemed a little off. Problem is, I can't really pin point why she seemed off so it's kinda hard to give a recommendation on how to improve the dialog. Maybe part of the problem is th...

After reading through the fic again, I noticed a little inconsistancy. Saturn woke up with a start, knocking the Silence Glaive off its perch. It hit the ground with a loud clatter, and the blade edge sank into the ground until it was balanced only on the haft Above, the image I'm getting is that th...

“Look! Saotome collapsed!” Indeed, Ranma’s body had fallen to the ground as the random student had mentioned, his body bouncing off the ground like a lifeless doll. However that was only half the picture. As the creature had swatted at that open space between Ranma’s arms, it was stopped with a res...

I am curious though. Are you planning on keeping this as an Omake or make it into a series? I think it would be a fun story to read.